If you take Catherine Toole at her word and believe she’s credible enough to deliver good advice, then you should read a recent post I stumbled upon last week. She’s British. I don’t know why I put that here, but it seemed worth a mention. She’s CEO of Sticky Content, which leans heavily on the color pink.
She put together a top ten list of words we should replace/wipe from our websites. I viewed it as a challenge. Can I use all no-no’s in one VLG overview.
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Next, I truncated the overview into the following.
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Good list, Catherine.
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